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His Ticket Out
He fixed his hair, applied fresh makeup, and touched his bulbous nose. He patted the lottery ticket in his pocket. Soon no more clowning around for him!
Saturday, January 15, 2011
Saturday Centus
His Ticket Out
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25 comments:
Well done!! We used some of the same words...peace
Oh yeah, I'd sooo quit my day job too!!! Great job!
Oh it's the dream worth the buck! Excellent!~Ames
good one!
Free at last!
Good Centus.
=)
Wonderful, I loved it!
Great gem of a story in this micro-fiction!
Best wishes,
Anna
Anna's SC#37-The lottery ticket
I like it! That's kinda how I feel about work too:@)
Great job - this was really difficult for me, but you nailed it. Maybe he'll buy the circus? Kat
You told us a lot in only 25 words! Great take on the prompt.
Really well done! I so liked this one.
Hi Claudia,
Clever twist at the end.
And thanks for the link to Jenny's blog. I took the plunge today and wrote a flash fiction piece.
Donna v.
http://donnasbookpub.blogspot.com
Very intriguing! My mind is running amok with possibilities!
Cool. I love the idea of a ticket out and wonder what he will do when he's not a clown.
Namaste..........cj
Great one, Claudia!!
That was a good one, Claudia. Thanks so much for stopping by my blog and for your kind comment. Susan
Great story Claudia! I liked the play on words too, very clever! A unique and creative take on the prompt!
LOL ... and usually i dont like clowns, but this just made me laugh ... thanks for that!!!
Very clever. I especially like the word, "bulbous."
Thanks for making me smile.
xoRobyn
Nice, a new life for the clown! Very cute
I loved this. At first I wondered where this was going. I loved that he was a clown. Good job.
Nice story. :-)
So glad he found a way out. :)
Claudia, such wonderful visualization in this little fiction micro-gem!
Thank you for linking.
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