My written response:
It was the most peculiar sign, a
finger pointing the way and a laughing face, an inside joke. I entered the rock
wall and headed into the castle. Despite bright sun, the stone walls were cool
inside. Moisture clung to the mortar; darkness was relieved by candlelight.
I meandered through the chilly rooms
admiring the fireplaces. I ascended stairwells with worn spots in the steps
where centuries of feet had tramped before me. By evening I realized I was viewing
the same rooms, the same heavy damask draperies. I was beginning to understand
the sign, but I wasn’t laughing.
244 comments:
1 – 200 of 244 Newer› Newest»Very atmospheric piece, I was beginning to feel a bit chilly reading it. This has a nice feel to it, a bit Poe-like. I think it was he who wrote about someone climbing the steps to the top of a dark tower, counting as he went along, and when he tried to descend he just kept on counting, way past the number of steps he'd climbed... Urgh!
Hi Claudia, nice story, and welcome to Friday Fictioneers (this is only my third week at it, and I'm really enjoying it).
I love the imagery you've used here Claudia. We were thinking along the same lines - creepy face. My story is here this week http://anneorchardwriter.wordpress.com/2012/11/22/friday-fictioneers-pride-goes/
Hi Claudia,
Nice story which builds to a subtle but disturbing conclusion. Ron
Welcome to FriFic, Claudia... your story made me think of tramping up endless stone stairs in many Welsh castles... I made it out. I liked your story... sounds like the start of a scary movie. I still haven't thought of anything...
Lots of us had creepy stories in response to the creepy face, lol. Enjoyed your story. Welcome to the Fictioneers!
Could have seen it heading in so many different directions - comedy, drama, horror, suspense...
Scott
Mine: http://kindredspirit23.wordpress.com/2012/11/22/friday-fictioneers-7/
I like the descriptions at the beginning and the disturbing end when realisation sets in.
I like it.
Welcome to the Fictioneers, where you'll find great people, excellent writing and addictive fun! I enjoyed the atmosphere you conjured up in your piece and came away with an Escher-like picture in my head of someone going around and around and around, even when they thought they weren't.
Moisture clung to the mortar; darkness was relieved by candlelight.
this is where a writer's work is done. by finding another way to describe something, just putting together a couple of words different. darkness "relieved" instead of saying the hall was lit by a candle or something like that. well done.
rich
Very creepy indeed. And lovely language.
Dear Claudia,
Welcome to Friday Fictioneers.
You did a great job of setting tone and backdrop. I loved "centuries of feet". Nice.
I look forward to reading more of you in the future.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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You have an incredible imagination. Thanks for mentioning this site. I will check it out.
Nicely done, Claudia! I love your take on the photo.
very nice, your word selection was rich and sensual.
Good description of many a castle tour where everything begins to look the same. Suspect your tour has an unanticipated, sinister end, however.
Dear Claudia,
Lost in the castle, leering face and finger pointing the way to nowhere. Well done.
Aloha,
Doug
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