I belong to the Crawford County Bombadils, a poetry
group. I have never met any of the poets, but the president keeps everyone
looped together by email. She gives us a writing assignment every month or two
and then we share our work. This month she said to try recalling a very early experience you had of
reading or hearing language that interested or excited or confused or
enlightened you. Then we were to write
about it, not necessarily poetry.
This is mine:
Recently in the name of progress, the two-storied, red
brick school house was torn down in my Kansas hometown. I spent good years
there, walked away with memories and lessons I remember still. One of the best
years in that old school was the fourth grade, the last age group on the ground
floor and taught by Phyllis Wells, who was a kind and genial woman, always.
I had wrestled through the alphabet, reading, multiplication tables, and
this was the year for poetry. Mrs. Well taught us about rhyme and how to set up
line lengths on a page. She sharpened our awareness to things around us, made
us attentive to the seasons. We were taught to keep a Poetry Notebook.
One whole segment of the wall length blackboard had permanent white lines
like a piece of paper. Sometime near the first of each month, we had a poetry
lesson. As a class we thought up a list of images that represented the month’s
activities and then suggested sentences to make poems while teacher put those
sentences up on the blackboard page. Together the teacher and class produced a
nice poem about October’s red maple leaves or April’s sweet Easter Bunny. We
were to copy the poem neatly on a page to put into a “folder” we had made
ourselves of construction paper and paper brads.
Then sometime in the month we were to write a similar poem of our own and
include it the folder. We decorated our folder, and we were encouraged to draw
or color scenes on the poem page that depicted the poem. Mrs. Well taught us
some minor drawing too. Of course a summer tree was easy, two lines and a
ballooning circle overhead, but a winter tree? She taught us how to draw
stately oaks with limbs and branches free of leaves reaching skyward. I loved
those trees! And to this day, if sitting with pencil and paper I find myself
doodling one of the trees if I let my mind wander.
Any free time we could work on our poetry. Then occasionally Mrs. Wells
collected the folders and read each page leaving encouraging comments or
helpful ideas on the poetry pages. While we were too young for metaphors and
similes, for alliteration, we learned appreciation and love of poetry first;
the rest would come. She planted seeds that would become a love a language and a
working knowledge about the power of words. The brick building might be gone,
but the poetry we learned in the old brick halls stills sings loud and clear in
our minds and hearts, the songs never-ending.
2 comments:
Your story well illustrates the impact one caring teacher can have on his/her students. Your Mrs. Well would be proud of you!
I absolutely loved school, with
the excpetion of math. I jumped att he chance to write compositions.
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