Thursday, November 22, 2012

Something New

It is Thanksgiving and I have a couple of morning hours to myself. I recently learned of a new 100 word writing exercise where a picture is the prompt every Friday. Here is a link to Friday Fictioneers if you would like to write yourself. http://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/2012/11/21/23-november-2012/  Below is the picture this week:

 
My written response:
 
It was the most peculiar sign, a finger pointing the way and a laughing face, an inside joke. I entered the rock wall and headed into the castle. Despite bright sun, the stone walls were cool inside. Moisture clung to the mortar; darkness was relieved by candlelight.
I meandered through the chilly rooms admiring the fireplaces. I ascended stairwells with worn spots in the steps where centuries of feet had tramped before me. By evening I realized I was viewing the same rooms, the same heavy damask draperies. I was beginning to understand the sign, but I wasn’t laughing.

244 comments:

  1. Very atmospheric piece, I was beginning to feel a bit chilly reading it. This has a nice feel to it, a bit Poe-like. I think it was he who wrote about someone climbing the steps to the top of a dark tower, counting as he went along, and when he tried to descend he just kept on counting, way past the number of steps he'd climbed... Urgh!

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  2. Hi Claudia, nice story, and welcome to Friday Fictioneers (this is only my third week at it, and I'm really enjoying it).

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  3. I love the imagery you've used here Claudia. We were thinking along the same lines - creepy face. My story is here this week http://anneorchardwriter.wordpress.com/2012/11/22/friday-fictioneers-pride-goes/

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  4. Hi Claudia,
    Nice story which builds to a subtle but disturbing conclusion. Ron

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  5. Welcome to FriFic, Claudia... your story made me think of tramping up endless stone stairs in many Welsh castles... I made it out. I liked your story... sounds like the start of a scary movie. I still haven't thought of anything...

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  6. Lots of us had creepy stories in response to the creepy face, lol. Enjoyed your story. Welcome to the Fictioneers!

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  7. Could have seen it heading in so many different directions - comedy, drama, horror, suspense...
    Scott
    Mine: http://kindredspirit23.wordpress.com/2012/11/22/friday-fictioneers-7/

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  8. I like the descriptions at the beginning and the disturbing end when realisation sets in.
    I like it.

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  9. Welcome to the Fictioneers, where you'll find great people, excellent writing and addictive fun! I enjoyed the atmosphere you conjured up in your piece and came away with an Escher-like picture in my head of someone going around and around and around, even when they thought they weren't.

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  10. Moisture clung to the mortar; darkness was relieved by candlelight.

    this is where a writer's work is done. by finding another way to describe something, just putting together a couple of words different. darkness "relieved" instead of saying the hall was lit by a candle or something like that. well done.

    rich

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  11. Very creepy indeed. And lovely language.

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  12. Dear Claudia,
    Welcome to Friday Fictioneers.
    You did a great job of setting tone and backdrop. I loved "centuries of feet". Nice.
    I look forward to reading more of you in the future.
    Shalom,
    Rochelle

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  13. I was very pleased to seek out this net-site.I wanted to thanks on your time for this wonderful learn!! I definitely enjoying every little little bit of it and I have you bookmarked to check out new stuff you blog post.

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  14. You have an incredible imagination. Thanks for mentioning this site. I will check it out.

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  15. Nicely done, Claudia! I love your take on the photo.

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  16. very nice, your word selection was rich and sensual.

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  17. Good description of many a castle tour where everything begins to look the same. Suspect your tour has an unanticipated, sinister end, however.

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  18. Dear Claudia,

    Lost in the castle, leering face and finger pointing the way to nowhere. Well done.

    Aloha,

    Doug

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