Lisa at http://www.writinginthebuff.net/ has led me to a new writing challenge. I have been reading her microfiction when possible, and she plays at Grandma's Goulash on Mondays by writing pieces based on a picture. However, the trick is to tell a story with ONLY 140 characters. I just couldn't do it. But this week I had to give it a try when I saw Mr. Perfect and his magnifying glass. My 140 characters are below. For full details and rules, please visit Grandma's Goulash at http://grandmas-goulash.info/.
I don’t think I’ll ever see
Any muck tricking me.So don’t fabricate a tale;
I know substances without fail.
It's clearly true
That on your shoe
Rests a pile of doggie poo!
Very neat - well done:-)
ReplyDeleteA little humor is always great for these micros! Well done
ReplyDeleteHi Claudia - Blogger keeps eating my comments!
ReplyDeleteI'll try again..You may not have done the microfiction before, but your contribution was well worth the wait. This is a riot! And thanks for the link-up! :)
I am glad he could clarify the confusion ;-)
ReplyDeleteA rhyming detective with a good nose for finding clues! Wonderful.
ReplyDelete— K
Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel
Love the humor (and a rhyme as well!)
ReplyDeleteThat was perfect! I never saw that ending coming. I'm still laughing.
ReplyDeleteMy SY: Questionable