tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post778854649179605758..comments2024-03-15T01:10:33.488-07:00Comments on Claudia's Page: Saturday Centus, Night TravelBookiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12043111213031211794noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-43698711671219606962010-09-13T22:50:55.175-07:002010-09-13T22:50:55.175-07:00I love that you made the dark and stormy night int...I love that you made the dark and stormy night into a beautiful thing. And wow, your words and analogies were so incredibly vivid. Excellent job!~Lissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06834140401817766254noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-35425888413447503702010-09-12T07:28:33.897-07:002010-09-12T07:28:33.897-07:00There are so many good things about this piece. I...There are so many good things about this piece. I'm late to the party, again, so I will add my "ditto" to the other comments - especially the concrete images!<br /><br />Thanks..........cjcj Schlottmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18217936774632262633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-22584404546869976812010-09-09T17:38:59.759-07:002010-09-09T17:38:59.759-07:00Beautiful imagery Claudia. I could really see the ...Beautiful imagery Claudia. I could really see the landscape unfolding before me as I read this. My favorite line? "lightening ripped across the sky like a broken zipper" - perfection! KatKathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12396548112800738809noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-487166911769229472010-09-08T16:25:26.014-07:002010-09-08T16:25:26.014-07:00"Field grasshoppers in wheat stubble"......"Field grasshoppers in wheat stubble"...I think I have been there! You created a nice picture in my mind. Thanks!<br /><br />I just posted two assignments in one post. I'm bad, but come visit me anyway!<br /><br />MalisaMalisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02716280057476425463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-67735945416233217762010-09-06T00:05:35.341-07:002010-09-06T00:05:35.341-07:00Great job this week Claudia! Lovely imagery and y...Great job this week Claudia! Lovely imagery and your word phrasing is wonderful. I loved this!Tgoettehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06850303812765307075noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-67304532500857370182010-09-05T16:46:34.180-07:002010-09-05T16:46:34.180-07:00What a great visual! I'm going to have to che...What a great visual! I'm going to have to check out Carolos Nakai! I loved this story!<br /><br />Thanks for stopping by!noexcuseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14149834972952594159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-60664278609994941342010-09-05T08:44:45.984-07:002010-09-05T08:44:45.984-07:00I like this! What a cool image you have produced....I like this! What a cool image you have produced.<br /><br />Thanks for visiting me.Louriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05477223472789865063noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-6173295287648580612010-09-05T08:26:35.522-07:002010-09-05T08:26:35.522-07:00love your approach to this - imagery is fantasticlove your approach to this - imagery is fantasticKaelinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09746709813296082126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-531329445068098902010-09-05T03:56:37.806-07:002010-09-05T03:56:37.806-07:00How I loved "ripping across the sky like a br...How I loved "ripping across the sky like a broken zipper"!!! Beautiful imagery!!People Who Know Me Would Say:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04621641188403948733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-35981410105404462822010-09-05T01:16:43.602-07:002010-09-05T01:16:43.602-07:00Oooo! Miss will tell you off because the prompt wa...Oooo! Miss will tell you off because the prompt wasn't used EXACTLY but I thought it was a great piece!jfb57https://www.blogger.com/profile/17876700842985406565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-78881288176481862682010-09-05T01:12:28.561-07:002010-09-05T01:12:28.561-07:00What beautiful imagery in this little story.
I al...What beautiful imagery in this little story.<br /><br />I also loved "the notes springing out of his cedar flute like field grasshoppers in wheat stubble". Gosh. That line alone was worth the price of admission!<br /><br />Wonderful link.<br /><br />Thank you.Jennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12462124067637610359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-20877554997322270642010-09-04T21:21:47.320-07:002010-09-04T21:21:47.320-07:00I love the Native American take on this. Really ni...I love the Native American take on this. Really nice.<br /><br />=)Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-83426790875631206262010-09-04T17:06:14.613-07:002010-09-04T17:06:14.613-07:00Excellent.
"Notes like field grasshoppers in ...Excellent.<br />"Notes like field grasshoppers in wheat stubble."<br />I love it. And i remember some of those stormy nights on the prairie. Ahhhhhh....lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03297214513440359826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-4270084293826441572010-09-04T16:46:16.544-07:002010-09-04T16:46:16.544-07:00Nicely done! Great mood you invoked, and I loved ...Nicely done! Great mood you invoked, and I loved the part about the flute.Tinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08925730745204736744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-55025221488270016952010-09-04T16:44:35.173-07:002010-09-04T16:44:35.173-07:00What atmosphere and detail! I felt like I wandered...What atmosphere and detail! I felt like I wandered into the middle of a novel I would like to read. Great descriptions there!Jennershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08044537551139633301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-17523322380870092632010-09-04T15:13:14.815-07:002010-09-04T15:13:14.815-07:00I like it when there is something left to the read...I like it when there is something left to the readers imagination. I can sense her anticipation. Nice! ~AmesAmeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15074479473400202674noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-21458269618542860892010-09-04T15:02:23.665-07:002010-09-04T15:02:23.665-07:00I love dark and stormy nights as long as I'm n...I love dark and stormy nights as long as I'm not driving. Your imagery makes me shiver. I'd have to find someplace to stop until the storm passed.Jenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12573262524755768643noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-77435971554214256212010-09-04T14:58:57.776-07:002010-09-04T14:58:57.776-07:00'the notes springing out of his cedar flute li...'the notes springing out of his cedar flute like field grasshoppers in wheat stubble' - wonderful!<br /><br />Nice use of the prompt.<br /><br />Susannah :-)<br />mines here - http://panopticulated.blogspot.com/2010/09/that-night-saturday-centus-week-18.htmlSusannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-41793681048515297652010-09-04T14:53:22.920-07:002010-09-04T14:53:22.920-07:00Oh I liked this. The flute notes...brilliant.Oh I liked this. The flute notes...brilliant.Terrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12112479764398508654noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-51122687963431584242010-09-04T14:41:06.945-07:002010-09-04T14:41:06.945-07:00Got my attention with Carlos Nakai's flute. Co...Got my attention with Carlos Nakai's flute. Could hear him playing softly in the background. Nice imagery.Cherylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14843459906469325667noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-28199381168963649062010-09-04T13:22:15.463-07:002010-09-04T13:22:15.463-07:00This was a very unique take on Ms.Jenny's them...This was a very unique take on Ms.Jenny's theme. I liked it very much. Growing up on the prairie of the Great Plains I could relate to your metaphors and analogies. Excellent!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01169693305157071792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-33465540867933287082010-09-04T13:09:00.371-07:002010-09-04T13:09:00.371-07:00Loved the Native American influence. Great Centus...Loved the Native American influence. Great Centus.Vikihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14421161703991840468noreply@blogger.com