tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post346180831002879314..comments2024-03-15T01:10:33.488-07:00Comments on Claudia's Page: Friday Fictioneers, HallwaysBookiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12043111213031211794noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-17156114480857047052012-12-13T15:12:19.742-08:002012-12-13T15:12:19.742-08:00pfvlv [url=http://www.drdrebeatscheapsales.com]bea...pfvlv [url=http://www.drdrebeatscheapsales.com]beats by dre sale[/url] gqlotf http://www.drdrebeatscheapsales.com wquz [url=http://www.drebeatsstudioheadphones.com]beats by dre sale[/url] oylpyh http://www.drebeatsstudioheadphones.com bafe [url=http://www.beatsdreheadphonesonsale.com]beats by dre sale[/url] lbcvob http://www.beatsdreheadphonesonsale.com zmxeb [url=http://www.dreheadphonesonsales.com]beats by dre outlet[/url] envuzg http://www.dreheadphonesonsales.com qogrw [url=http://www.drdrebeatssales.com]dr dre beats[/url] thiok http://www.drdrebeatssales.com kgctd [url=http://www.focsa.org.au/myreview/beatsbydre.phtml]monster beats[/url] xvqco http://www.focsa.org.au/myreview/beatsbydre.phtml uobAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-22863867471188344442012-12-12T22:46:12.348-08:002012-12-12T22:46:12.348-08:00Spooky!
Well written.Spooky!<br /><br />Well written.Abraham Gumbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12847434455671660149noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-81640285267728805902012-12-10T13:43:37.556-08:002012-12-10T13:43:37.556-08:00An interesting out-of-body experience. We have met...An interesting out-of-body experience. We have met the sick person, and they are us.Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02951989303915273807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-53829589870537211342012-12-09T08:49:20.958-08:002012-12-09T08:49:20.958-08:00Great twist at the end. I'm thinking this is t...Great twist at the end. I'm thinking this is the moment when the soul takes leave of the body. RonAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-77050735058057741632012-12-08T20:45:37.507-08:002012-12-08T20:45:37.507-08:00I'm also confused... wondering if it is her mo...I'm also confused... wondering if it is her mother or she herself having the out-of-body experience? Loranoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-1367270068172478042012-12-08T10:41:46.132-08:002012-12-08T10:41:46.132-08:00Is that her mother or she herself having an out-of...Is that her mother or she herself having an out-of-body experience?Parulhttp://faitaccompli.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-74000022571057952492012-12-08T04:15:18.030-08:002012-12-08T04:15:18.030-08:00Dear Claudia,
You gave the story sight, scent and...Dear Claudia, <br />You gave the story sight, scent and feel. Well done. <br />Shalom,<br />RochelleRochelle Wisoff-Fieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00090374697915874481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-52200740913470238832012-12-07T23:47:36.657-08:002012-12-07T23:47:36.657-08:00Oh how I can visualise 'a lifetime's use o...Oh how I can visualise 'a lifetime's use of Estee Lauder'. Nice work, enjoyed it.Sandra Crookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00534491053812317718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-30841309992681152342012-12-07T22:05:39.271-08:002012-12-07T22:05:39.271-08:00Bedridden, yet walking the halls in her mind. The ...Bedridden, yet walking the halls in her mind. The mind is capable of amazing things and your story illustrates one lonely aspect of that. Well done.<br /><br />Aloha,<br /><br />DougDouglas MacIlroyhttp://ironwoodwind.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-51438374536523923672012-12-07T21:03:56.070-08:002012-12-07T21:03:56.070-08:00sweet!sweet!billgncshttp://bwfiction.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-23268161600868021562012-12-07T14:23:48.655-08:002012-12-07T14:23:48.655-08:00Very unexpected end. You had me there... :-)Very unexpected end. You had me there... :-)brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-29290816072908862392012-12-07T11:55:56.231-08:002012-12-07T11:55:56.231-08:00ewww.
Nasty one.
Randyewww.<br />Nasty one.<br /><br />RandyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-30715059443768606792012-12-07T10:28:09.159-08:002012-12-07T10:28:09.159-08:00Really nice! The line "residue of a lifetime...Really nice! The line "residue of a lifetime's use of Este Lauder met her at the door" brought to mind the smells from the "old people's home" that my great-grandmother was in when I knew her. Good twist at the end, oto.janethttp://sustainabilitea.wordpress.com/2012/12/05/friday-fictioneers-the-big-cheese-or-the-gjetost-of-christmas-past/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-33584850664121939272012-12-07T10:10:55.321-08:002012-12-07T10:10:55.321-08:00Great writing. I enjoyed your piece very much.Great writing. I enjoyed your piece very much.Silently Heardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10078013975426130699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-75654675949911084942012-12-07T10:04:11.522-08:002012-12-07T10:04:11.522-08:00THAT was a shock! You could elaborate on this for ...THAT was a shock! You could elaborate on this for at least a full-size short story's length, I think. Nicely written.SharonWhttp://newpillowbook.wordpress.com/2012/12/07/friday-fictioneers-entrance-exam/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-35890453026190737722012-12-07T09:34:28.226-08:002012-12-07T09:34:28.226-08:00I like the unexpected twist. Nicely done!I like the unexpected twist. Nicely done!Jess Schirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04930756756945812094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-75688066635296636792012-12-07T09:12:52.399-08:002012-12-07T09:12:52.399-08:00I thought out of body experience as well. Very coo...I thought out of body experience as well. Very cool storyH.L. Pauffhttp://hlpauff.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-26151495367408905882012-12-07T08:36:01.490-08:002012-12-07T08:36:01.490-08:00Spooky story! i like the set up, and how you leave...Spooky story! i like the set up, and how you leave so many questions unanswered. Great job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-54277513759225566712012-12-07T07:30:40.292-08:002012-12-07T07:30:40.292-08:00so at first, i'm thinking an out-of-body death...so at first, i'm thinking an out-of-body death experience, but she's still breathing, so not yet death, but perhaps comatose. well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com