tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post2726607279329659811..comments2024-03-15T01:10:33.488-07:00Comments on Claudia's Page: Friday Fictioneers/Leaving HomeBookiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12043111213031211794noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-74688537241007406252013-02-25T05:40:48.647-08:002013-02-25T05:40:48.647-08:00Such a sad storySuch a sad storyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-38998810758520846162013-02-24T09:24:53.210-08:002013-02-24T09:24:53.210-08:00Such sadness. Guess nothing lasts forever.Such sadness. Guess nothing lasts forever.Shirleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04337958837908666504noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-13861436046078705422013-02-24T06:06:39.906-08:002013-02-24T06:06:39.906-08:00Wonderful melancholy, and indeed not pristine any ...Wonderful melancholy, and indeed not pristine any longer. brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-22929813844120712382013-02-23T15:27:13.134-08:002013-02-23T15:27:13.134-08:00I feel sad for her that she can't gather her p...I feel sad for her that she can't gather her peas. How sad to leave such a beautiful place.<br />DenmotherAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-88322345144024987412013-02-23T09:04:29.944-08:002013-02-23T09:04:29.944-08:00"squeaking on each backward tilt"--I lov..."squeaking on each backward tilt"--I love sound in a piece of writing. so many of us forget about it. train-whistlehttp://www.trainswhistle.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-4445653380892731382013-02-23T06:17:04.195-08:002013-02-23T06:17:04.195-08:00But she will take her memories with her. No need f...But she will take her memories with her. No need for a valise for those. Ann Isik (Poetic Mapping)http://annisik51.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-9072448400209722182013-02-23T02:57:50.986-08:002013-02-23T02:57:50.986-08:00Packed with everything. Not a thing missing. Well ...Packed with everything. Not a thing missing. Well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-12960956870131770432013-02-22T09:43:44.032-08:002013-02-22T09:43:44.032-08:00Very sad, well done. You made me feel for her.Very sad, well done. You made me feel for her.Sandra Crookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00534491053812317718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-66739358036088685802013-02-22T09:13:13.106-08:002013-02-22T09:13:13.106-08:00Hi Claudia,
Such good writing. Felt like I was rig...Hi Claudia,<br />Such good writing. Felt like I was right there. Like you, I love old barns, old farmhouses, the country lifestyle. Felt sad for your character as she ends this era in her life. RonAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-63407687047560403032013-02-22T06:45:26.314-08:002013-02-22T06:45:26.314-08:00So sad when life moves on, forcing the change. We ...So sad when life moves on, forcing the change. We will hold on forever unless life changes our path.Dobsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10871553369978431939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-34605841688071400312013-02-22T01:20:42.401-08:002013-02-22T01:20:42.401-08:00I can't imagine walking away from a lifetime o...I can't imagine walking away from a lifetime of memories. What a difficult thing that must be. And yet I've watched both sets of grandparents do it, plus my in-laws. I'm not sure I could put those emotions to words. You do a lovely job here.<br /><br />Debra Kristi<br /><br />P.S. Blogger doesn't like my WP identity. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-54528332492704072252013-02-21T19:19:17.804-08:002013-02-21T19:19:17.804-08:00Hi Claudia -- it went from hopeful to sad. You u...Hi Claudia -- it went from hopeful to sad. You used each word well.billgncshttp://bwfiction.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-2381925562555139642013-02-21T15:26:04.698-08:002013-02-21T15:26:04.698-08:00What terrific memories.What terrific memories.Bohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05985370927609164513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-91444740893517219532013-02-21T15:24:23.432-08:002013-02-21T15:24:23.432-08:00Lovely, Claudia. My grandparents lived on a farm ...Lovely, Claudia. My grandparents lived on a farm and I can identify with this.<br /><br />janetjanethttp://sustainabilitea.wordpress.com/2013/02/20/friday-fictioneers-warrior/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-61524528231272366672013-02-21T14:41:52.228-08:002013-02-21T14:41:52.228-08:00Oh my goodness you conveyed so much with so few wo...Oh my goodness you conveyed so much with so few words. Love it!<br />How's your weather? Snow and sleet here.Linda O'Connellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15982895073903619018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-90350233365621680812013-02-21T09:20:38.273-08:002013-02-21T09:20:38.273-08:00Very touching - real emotion in your story. Very touching - real emotion in your story. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-90524581327414724242013-02-21T08:26:08.712-08:002013-02-21T08:26:08.712-08:00The imagery is lovely, like going home. The imagery is lovely, like going home. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-64590882909668894902013-02-21T07:52:28.292-08:002013-02-21T07:52:28.292-08:00Dear Claudia,
A poignant story. You made me feel ...Dear Claudia, <br />A poignant story. You made me feel a lifetime in just a hundred words. <br />shalom,<br />RochelleRochelle Wisoff-Fieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00090374697915874481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-9055447615841939312013-02-21T07:07:11.145-08:002013-02-21T07:07:11.145-08:00I had to sell my family house about nine years ago...I had to sell my family house about nine years ago. The ending of your story reminds me having my last look. Touching.Silently Heardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10078013975426130699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9039090177447731633.post-69073092346170284652013-02-21T06:41:24.352-08:002013-02-21T06:41:24.352-08:00Hi Claudia,
If only they could talk . . . Your sto...Hi Claudia,<br />If only they could talk . . . Your story is very evocative and sad. Donna Volkenannthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04540727800410234483noreply@blogger.com